In Class:
*Collected teenbiz article: Hawaii: Pidgin
*Went over how to improve Stanza 1 Ballad
1. Words needs to rhyme (last word in lines 2 & 4)
2. 4+ words needed per line
3. List down 7 groups that came (not all on 1 line)
4. Explain why groups were needed on plantation
5. 1 sentence per line instead of cutting off a sentence
Use following format if still confused:
Line 1: Discuss groups that came
Line 2: Discuss why they were needed
Line 3: Discuss groups that came
Line 4: Discuss why they were needed
Switch order if you want
Homework:
1. Revise Stanza 1 on folder paper
2. Complete Stanza 4 (change cultural diffusion to assimilation) - Discuss plantation pidgin in this Stanza
NOTE: DISAPPOINTED IN STUDENTS NOT TURNING IN HOMEWORK TODAY. TEENBIZ REPORTS NEED TO BE HANDED IN. IF NO COMPUTER OR PRINTER NOT WORKING, PLEASE HAVE PARENT WRITE A NOTE. THANK YOU TO THOSE FEW STUDENTS WHO DID THAT. - MR. WONG